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các bạn tải miễn phí ebook: Write better essays in just 20 minutes a day part 13
– REVISING PARAGRAPHS–
Revising Individual Paragraphs
To check the paragraphs that make up your essay, you’ll need to examine your writing with a stronger lens than
the one you used to for “big-picture” issues. You will be determining whether each paragraph has just one main
idea, whether there are adequate transitions between paragraphs, and if your introductory and concluding para-
graphs fulfill their distinct purposes.
One Controlling Idea
A paragraph is a group of sentences about one idea. That idea should be stated in a topic sentence, which is typ-
ically the first or last line. Topic sentences not only guide your reader, but they also link the sentences in the para-
graph together by stating the idea that they all relate to. If you can’t locate a topic sentence, should the main idea
be stated in one, instead of implied by your examples?
If there is a topic sentence, does each sentence relate to it? In the lying with silence essay, each paragraph con-
tains only one main idea except for the sixth paragraph. Here, the writer describes the lie and its consequences in
one paragraph. It would be more effective to dedicate another paragraph to the consequences. The revised para-
graphing then looks like this (topic sentences are in bold):
I’m guilty of silent deceptions, too. Last year, I discovered that my friend’s boyfriend was seeing someone else. I kept
quiet abou
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– REVISING PARAGRAPHS–
Revising Individual Paragraphs
To check the paragraphs that make up your essay, you’ll need to examine your writing with a stronger lens than
the one you used to for “big-picture” issues. You will be determining whether each paragraph has just one main
idea, whether there are adequate transitions between paragraphs, and if your introductory and concluding para-
graphs fulfill their distinct purposes.
One Controlling Idea
A paragraph is a group of sentences about one idea. That idea should be stated in a topic sentence, which is typ-
ically the first or last line. Topic sentences not only guide your reader, but they also link the sentences in the para-
graph together by stating the idea that they all relate to. If you can’t locate a topic sentence, should the main idea
be stated in one, instead of implied by your examples?
If there is a topic sentence, does each sentence relate to it? In the lying with silence essay, each paragraph con-
tains only one main idea except for the sixth paragraph. Here, the writer describes the lie and its consequences in
one paragraph. It would be more effective to dedicate another paragraph to the consequences. The revised para-
graphing then looks like this (topic sentences are in bold):
I’m guilty of silent deceptions, too. Last year, I discovered that my friend’s boyfriend was seeing someone else. I kept
quiet abou
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