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Today is monday. The first day of week. We incluđe Nice Huyen, Huyen Dang, Trang, 2 Linh, Giang and me. We went to Kichi kichi restaurent.

We agreed with each othẻ that we were in the front of the Nice Huyen house at 6 pm. At 6:04, I was there but noone was there. I called Huyen then she went out of here house. For 5 minutes after that Huyen Dang came there. We had to waite for remained members. While we were waiting, we chatted. Huyen Dang talked a lot. It seemed she never stop. But I like that. I want to become someone like her. She is very confident.

At 6:30 We all were there. At 6:40, we were at the restaurent. It''s very clean. The first time I cam there. We went to floor 2. Woa. the environment is very warm. May be by the red lamps. I like them.

We sat together and ate a lot. But unluckily, my stomach was not good, I only ate vegetable and mushroom, sometimes ate meat.

While we were eating, a very handsome man came. oh my godness. No words can expres my feeling. Woa. I seem to stop to eat. Woa. I looked at him. Woa. He is tall, handsome. his nose is high. his voice is warm .Today is the best day.Woa. I wished I could go with him. This moment I thought if I had beenHuyen Dang, I would have come his place and asked to take a photo with him. But I couldn''t. I guest he is American. And his friend is handsome, too.

While I looked at him, my friend took photos. they were full and this time for them was coming. They took a lot.

At the end of the party. the bill came. Over 900.000 VND.He He. It was expensive. We had to go home. But I didn''t want to.Because the man who stole my heart still was there. Poor me.

- restaurant

- she went out of her house

- After 5 minutes she came there... cho for chi nữa làm j, lủng củng ra

- While nên dùng 2 vế chia Ving nhưng như thế lặp chủ ngữ. Hem hay. Ấy nên dùng thế này : When waiting for them, we chatted... gì đó

- came chứ hem phải cam... cố gắng đánh máy để ý hơn nhé

- guess hem phải guest...

Mấy lỗi cơ bản. Còn ấy dùng nhiều câu đơn qá nghe như văn nói ý ^^. Cố gắng hơn nhé... Mình đi ngủ đây

thanks, tớ sẽ cố gắng. ^^